Saturday, February 16, 2008

Paragraph Writing - "Edit Version"

Rina is my best friends. She is so funny girl. She will make jokes wherever we are. She has much money. When we are outside, she's likes to support me to eat. Wherever she is, she's likes talking too much. She always has more stories to tell, that's why I did not bored with her. Then what the important is, she wills angry when I talked about married. I can't think of anyone better to take to World Disney than Rina. Rina's the only my best friends that I had. Hope she will get married on fast and get her successful life. Lastly, I hope our friendship will never end.

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